This is the essence of what we have covered so far on the Open University Masters in Creative Writing. Five weeks. Five Subjects. Five sets of exercises.
- Beginning: What do they convey? Hard information? Atmosphere? A sense of the exotic?
Do they raise questions in your mind? Or introduce character? Are the senses engaged? Do they inspire emotion – or is their appeal more cerebral and detached? - Character: An effective way to draw a reader into the story is to create a character with whom they can empathise. This is not the same thing as liking them; readers empathise with characters they can identify with. Often, this means playing on fears and concerns that are universal. Readers are likely to empathise with a character in jeopardy, who is vulnerable, or whose human frailty mirrors their own.
- Point of View: One of the keys to rendering a consistent and authentic point of view is establishing what the character whose point of view we are inhabiting knows. This is something you as the author need to have straight from the start, though it might only be made gradually clear to the reader.
- Dialogue: Observe how dialogue ‘shows’ us the characters, allowing them to reveal themselves through what they say (or don’t say) and how they say it. Building conflict into dialogue will give it energy and drive – and remember, ‘conflict’ doesn’t necessarily mean an argument.
- Plot: Often begins with the disruption of ‘normal’ life, usually precipitating a crisis or change of some sort. In the world of screenwriting this disruption is known as the ‘inciting incident’, and it is also a useful term for the fiction writer.
I always enjoy your column. You have a gift of discussing interactions and beautiful stories. Keep going and keep these good writings coming. 😊
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I’m so glad you like it, Revati. 🙂
It’s people like you that make it all worthwhile. I’ll keep the good stuff coming – don’t worry. 😉
How’s your day shaping up?
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Thankyou for your kind words! My days are going awe-inspiring 😊
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You’re very welcome, Revati. Good to hear that your day is going so well. What’s the weather like there? Here is very cloudy and so the sky is filled with many shades of grey right now. 🙂
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Nah! Here it a bit hot and cold these days. 😊
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Hot and cold?
How awful!
If only it could be
Cold and hot!
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Haha! Charming 😊
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🙂
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Haven’t you been well these days?
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It’s been a busy weekend – that’s all, what with it being Diwali and all of that.
Oh – Happy Diwali – sorry it’s late! 🙂
There was all the cleaning and cooking and having people around that I didn’t get as much done on my blog as I wanted to. Sorry to neglect you, Revati.
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Thank you for wishing. And it doesn’t really matters if you wish late. Hope you are in the pink of your health now. You did not neglect me really, I understand. Apologies for bothering you Robert 😅. Have a good day.
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It’s totally a pleasure to chat to you. How could such a nice exchange of words be a bother?
My health was never in question, I was just busy is all. 🙂
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OK. Good to hear it. My pleasure too😊to chat with a nice person like you.
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Thanks. 🙂
Connecting up the whole world is such a good way to progress in life. Spread the love!
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True that 😀
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🙂
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Some good things to keep in mind, thanks! 🙂
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Well, I typed them up as an aide memoire for a story (https://levishedated.wordpress.com/2016/10/29/redemption/) and it seemed a shame to waste them – so here they are. 🙂
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I read in reverse order but when I got to this, I thought that you had paid attention to all these things in the work I just read. So that’s pretty awesome. 😄
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Nice! Awesome of you to tell me that, Victoria – appreciated. 🙂
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