(continues from Redemption?)
The story so far: Tess was jilted at the altar by an Italian charmer by the name of Luigi. Five years later, and she still feels the pain. Sure, she’s off the hard liquor but she’s now deep into baiting her work colleagues, and probably her friends and family too if her conduct at work is anything to go by. For this, she has been dubbed The Dragon Lady.
One fine day at the office she overhears, by chance, that the person who will deliver the sandwiches that day will be a chap by the name of Luigi. Well, boy does that name send Tess into a spin. She relives the anguish of her wedding day, charts her decline into alcoholism and reflects on how her actions towards her co-workers have earned her that most damning of nicknames.
Anyway, it turns out that it’s not the old Luigi after all; this is a new, improved Luigi who bears an uncanny resemblance to the old one, and she is instantly smitten. Of course, what she does not realise, as she sits in the restaurant for the first course of her new life with new Luigi, is that she is still in love with the old one.
So, we join them at the table. Take in the ambience – a single candle lending our sweethearts an isolated island, music almost quieting the passion rising in our young lover’s hearts and a fine white to tickle their palette as they ignore the breadsticks to gaze instead into each other’s eyes. They barely notice as the waiter arrives to take their order.
“Tess – oh My God, is that really you Tess? How long has it been? You look absolutely ravishing.” An excited voice pulls Tess out of her contemplation of Luigi’s eyelashes and she looks up in alarm. There is something very familiar about this voice. Yep, you guessed it, kind reader – it’s the old Luigi!
Well Tess, understandably, goes bonkers. She picks up the wine bottle, still with a satisfying weight to it and, expertly converting it into the cosh-from-hell, whacks Luigi over the head with it.
I think you need not ask which one! The feelings surging through her bosom give her only one realistic option. As new Luigi sits, stunned, literally, with blood pouring from a gaping wound, she calls out to the man standing above her “He was holding me against my will, Luigi. Quick, take me away from here – I love you!”
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Ha ha! What!? I thought she bludgeoned the old Luigi. She is bonkers! 😄
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You don’t mourn someone for 5 years without there being some love for them in your heart! She wants old Luigi back! 😀
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Well, she’s about to go to jail so… I hope he waits for her. 😁
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Tess and Luigi – on the run! 🙂
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Well, running is what he does best! 😄 Now at least she gets to come along.
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Hahaha – never thought of that! 🙂
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Thankyou for sharing this beautiful story. Appreciable and worth it as always. 😊
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The one where she cracks her date’s head open with a wine bottle?! Are you perhaps thinking of another ‘beautiful story’, Revati? 🙂
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Hehe! No Robert not again😂😀I love to have slayed ending. Tess is certainly going stupid in love!
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Hahaha – he’s not dead – just stunned!https://youtu.be/4vuW6tQ0218
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I know right? Robert😀I meant I would love to have slayed ending 😁otherwise your creativity and writings are always splendid. 😊and there was a massacre at the end already.
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Ah! You mean that just stunning New Luigi was not enough! You would have preferred Tess to whip out a pistol and shoot him between the eyes for coming between her and Original Luigi! Seems a bit harsh for a first date and closes off rather a lot of plot possibilities, but let me have a think about that.
I’ve thought – I’m afraid New Luigi has to live – I have plans for him. 😉
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Nah! New Luigi has to live plus he is enough to create a dramatic plot. I wouldn’t have even wanted Tess to do it to that extent. What she did would change relations between new Luigi and Tess, that awkward gap after he would be well off and return,everything. I was saying Bloodshed at the very end, like you are going to continue this one. Plans for the next story makes me curious. 😉The cooking will be done
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We just adding spice to the pot. This one is cooking nicely. Yes, I may continue this story – it seems interesting. 🙂
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Luck👍this is definitely gonna be an amazing journey ☺
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For sure, my hippy friend. 😉
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Haha! Not you my friend atleast😂
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So why did you use the name Ecstasy49?
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Hehe! It was very random. I am all excited for new stuffs to come. So, maybe because of this.!! What’s behind (levishedated)?
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It’s a word I made up to be unique on the internet and to belong to me. If you search with that word, everything that comes up is mine! 🙂
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So what’s the word? May I know?
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levishedated
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I just forgot what I asked😂will surf for it
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😀 okay.
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OK OK! I got it just forgot my previous comment.
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Thought so. 😉
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😊
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Too elaborative😂
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The link😂😂ROFL a hysterical sketch indeed
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My sense of humour was warped by Monty Python:
https://levishedated.wordpress.com/2016/07/06/my-sense-of-humour
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Yeah! Very relatable. Looks like few people understand you. Too much into books and making world of own.
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Yeah, that sounds like me. :b You too?
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Maybe yes😅
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😀
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I am into books and my parents call me hippy😂
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Hahaha – Hippy is it! That sounds interesting. You should be living on the beach in Goa. 🙂
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Goa exactly😘😀interesting that you always speak in my sphere. But they won’t let me go after all I am their daughter.
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Still, you have the advantage of being safe in the family home. With books. Can’t be all that bad! 😏
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Nah! Not always half the year I stay in a hostel far away from my family. But because I am surrounded by books I am always accompanied.
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I understand. Because the books are so precious they need guarding. 😉
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Yeah! Right😉
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😀
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Why what’s with you?
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Just want to think that you are safe.
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😊how saccharine! Thanks for the concern. Hope you are safe there too:)
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I am very safe. But it will go dark soon so I had better go home quick!
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Yeah sure!cheerio
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Fat fingers? 🙂
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Nah! Just connection problems. The notification was that my reply wasn’t posted and then again I typed till then it was posted and thus like this I ended up replying several times😅
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Yeah, I’ve been had like that before. It’s really annoying. You have my profound sympathy, Revati. 🙂
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Thanks, Robert😊but you too. Just replying out of the box of your story sphere isn’t this all?
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You’re doing a great job of being you, Revati and no one can take that away from you. 🙂
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Ah! Yes of course. ☺Have a good day.
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Will do. U2. 🙂
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☺
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Apologies for my stupidity
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Nah – you’re not stupid! 🙂
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Haha! Somewhere I am in doing things
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Well then – me too. 🙂
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Haha! How is that?
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We all have a touch of the stupids every now and again – right?
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Certainly Robert a touch of stupids
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As a matter of fact we have chatted all the way In the comment section of yours of your beautiful story
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That’s what it’s there for. Connecting. 🙂
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Haha! Yeah,Right.
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Anyways I Googled you up and found you over many social sites.
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You find anything interesting? 🙂
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Of course I did. I always adore your story sketches and every stuff. And found you in sound cloud, twitter etc etc.
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Hahaha – some of that SoundCloud stuff is … a bit far-out! Not my finest hour. 🙂
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I see. You workout in wordpress
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I work all sorts of things out here. 😉
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Yes, of course. That too, beautifully and lively.
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Yeah sure! Cheerio
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Smiling.
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Silly and fun. I can picture New Luigi sliding down his chair while old Luigi looks on in, what? Horror at what she’s done? Appreciation for the effort? But that would make him kind of crazy, too..
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I’m thinking of moving them to the US – maybe Texas – where crazy psychopathy seems to come more natural. 😉
(boy have I been watching too much bad TV!)
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Do you watch on your phone? I thought you gave away your TV.
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I did – so I don’t have a device with a TV signal receiver on it,. But a lot of ‘TV’ is available on the internet and DVDs these days. I’m probably using the phrase in a way that a purist would frown on – sorry.
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Well, yes, I am a purist 😉 So you watch on your computer screen, like Hulu or Netflix or something similar…
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I do – yes. Amazon Prime or DVDs at the moment.
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You know, I have Amazon Prime for deliveries but I’ve never watched anything. It’s good?
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There are some good series on AP, but it seems that hardly any of the blockbusters make it through to my screen. If you’re not particular, it’s fine.
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🙂
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